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Road Of Lonely Nights

Along this road of lonely nights,
I wonder where it leads.
Through visions of my nightmare past,
Through future undone deeds...

It seems it lasts forever,
I know not where I'll end.
This place my hearts been ripped apart,
This place where I can't mend...

Each curve ahead is danger,
Each bend a battle ground.
I reach my hand to touch my love,
I die in sorrows drowned...

I come unto a crossroad,
I know not where to turn.
If right or left I may meet death,
If forward I may burn...

I slowly travel onward,
Each step I take with pause.
Until at last I know my place.
Until I know my cause...

She lay here right beside me,
The reason I'm alive.
My hopes, my dreams, my everything,
My reason to survive...

I watch her as she slumbers,
So quiet I do weep.
I softly say I love you dear,
I pray my soul you'll keep...

Along this road of lonely nights,
My journey now does cease.
I close my eyes and wish for sleep,
I search for inner peace. . .
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I'm not sure actually where this one came from. It started out to be about one thing, and ended up being about something completely different. Perhaps its because thats the way things went between her and I today... I don't know.

Please let me know what you think...

Thanks & Happy Thanksgiving
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:iconprettyspider:
Your meter and choice of words is completely mind-boggling. That really is a very beautiful and completely expressive poem. I'm really glad you decided to share it. ^^ Keep writing!
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:iconartificialflower:
frank, u're a good ass poem person writer mag-ji-gi thingie kinda dude har har har

i like ur poems, n i like reading them, i think they're awesome, i wish i can write like that, i find it totally inspiring, ur words and how u use them, my words all comes out kinda funky and grammar is really bad

n stuff

but keep it up, i like ur stuff alot
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~hippyjm Dec 2, 2003   Artisan Crafter
Nice one, seems like were going down similar roads at the same time.
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:iconnotrust:
This is beautiful, I love the flow, and it's very sweet :rose:
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:iconcooper:
dude awesome! :+fav: means a lot on a bunch of different playing grounds.... one is the rhyme scheme and tempo.... nicely done, i love rhymes not many do eh? oh well their loss.... anyways these feelings you've writen are what most of us feel all the time... but not all of us have that someone to lay next to... some of us... its just a dream, not me... i have that someone to lay next to... but thats besides the point, anwyas nicely done, im glad to see you writing again... take care :O
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